It has an interesting story to tell, however you may need to work on your grammar and spelling. For example, you quite often mixed up "You're" for "Your" and you forgot to add multiple commas. But, like I've said before this has a very interesting storyline despite how short the chapter is. It's comedic, heartbreaking, and quite shocking towards the end with that twist. I personally would've given this a 3 or 3.5 with ratings overall but Webnovel does not include plot twists as a review option. Tldr; Very nice, just needs some reviewing on spelling and grammar. Very nice story.