Wingardiam_Leviosa

Too low stats for a Viltrumite soldier. It should look like this:- Strength: An average Viltrumite can lift and press thousands of tons, while elite warriors like Thragg can lift millions of tons. Their baseline strength starts at roughly 200 tons and increases continuously throughout their lives. Durability: They are nigh-invulnerable, capable of withstanding impacts equivalent to their own lifting capacity, surviving the vacuum of space, and enduring extreme temperatures without permanent damage. Speed: They can travel interstellar distances and traverse planets in minutes, easily breaking the sound barrier and moving faster than human perception allows. Lifespan: Viltrumites have decelerated aging, allowing them to live for thousands of years while maintaining peak physical condition. Other Abilities: They can fly via an inner-ear balancing system, hold their breath for weeks, heal from catastrophic injuries rapidly, and require minimal food or oxygen.

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They really can't do that because of this guy.

So this guy really put some random's people lives over his own and his sister. Where is the love, fury and resolve he had before to avenge and revive his sister? He could have waited till he was strong enough to confront the royal family.

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Get Maeve too. Getting her means two in one package. Best Girl.

The art of manipulation is such that you never know if you are being manipulated. By showing so much of her inner thoughts of manipulating this and that, the manipulation part becomes redundant. Too much dialogue and inner thoughts instead of actions. And I have seen that all your characters seem to have unnatural hate, pride or anger in their tone of voice. Tone them down and assign some personality to each of your character and follow it through. Solaria right now looks more like a bratty teenager instead of Empress. Another thing is we don't know which direction or goal is Sol moving towards, making it boring. Tell us what are his immediate goals and shows his course of actions towards those goals. All things said, the story is going good but just needs some refinement and direction. Good Luck.