I'm going to assume you mean cuz random violence is funny

this is high School DxD it's basically a given for it to be a harem

I mean you're not wrong but I say it's more a 60/40

I can see the resemblance but only if I was drunk enough I would think that was a chick

so a normal fan fic with the oc just is watching the plot basically so basically the author is just copying pasting the plot of the show or movie without adding any new nuances of interest a pretty normal fanfic

to clarify a hive mind implies multiple consciousness working together with different thoughts there can be a hierarchical structure of command an overmind implies one consciousness with multiple bodies

to simplify this argument yes and no the only question you need to answer now if you want to see a gang ........ bang

personally I just wanted to throw my own two cents into this love the story I love the twist on the main character and his persona personally whenever I read a story I think they need to take a note from persona when it comes to character development and this I can say you done perfectly[img=update]

do you know what hen////tai and no I do not mean it's literal transition into English to be clear as far as I am aware the main character does not have a name he's just using the name of someone he ate if it mentioned him having a original name I do not recall

the plot thickens I'm not talking about the story

by the way I forgot to mention this in my first comment and enjoying the story so far though for smut with plot you're going a little too heavy on the smut and not enough plot just throwing out my opinion

for one of the reasons why you're having a trouble thinking of what he he should do you made him too strong him just having a Rick Sanchez intelligence is overpowered but you made him smarter not to mention all the other things you gave him gave him unlimited resources and he's a mad scientist he now doesn't have to go out looking for rare and valuable resources and here's an idea he can just go somewhere for fun or s**** and giggles like Rick it doesn't have to have a compelling reason for him too do something it can just be interesting to read like here's an idea go around on searching the universal and DNA a catalog game it building a f****** huge worship and going on a galactic war path going out to a planet and getting in a shootout he doesn't have to have a reason to go somewhere he can just go with Rick pretty sure you seen the show oh you can have an idea of what he does and since he can travel to to any universe you can just put them in the plot out of that and see what happens now I don't mean to be ribbing you I'm just throwing out ideas

yes to 2b

do it we need some smart girls in the story

smash

I like the story so far but here's my opinion on his aversion to cyberware he lives in cyberpunk he's going to have to get some modifications done if he wants to survive there are some he can avoid so he cannot or strength mods the armor is a great idea but he wants to go fast he's going to need to get some mods or he's going to die he can't have all of his tech external l or else without it he's going to be very squishy sorry for my word vomit there

at this point has basically got triplets of the same girl

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for one I think you should have added comedy to the tags interesting main character but I'm pretty sure he's insane you might want to add a crack warning or maybe that's just the beginning of the story I don't know what you going to do with it later oh well I found that it's a pretty interesting read