Brooke_Dunlop_7788

i am sorry to hear that but thank you for giving it a go anyway.

This is my first story so i am learning as i go along, do hope my later chapter a broken up enough so i hope you enjoy it if you have any more advice, please let me know. Thank you

Thank you for your advice i will try better

I have Fixed it thank you for bringing it to my attention

Sorry i didn't write it in the story i had it in some notes i wrote 100 points is 5% status upgrade