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Daoistf7YZbm

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2023-09-17 JoinedNigeria
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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Replied to Murdda223

    Yes. but most wouldn't appear on earth since the universal law bounds them. unless they uses vessels to descend.

    "20,000 or 200,000 thousand years have passed by since y'all were created. You have indeed advanced extensively. From the bottom of the food chain, you now are the rulers of the earth. But sadly you could barely reach the moon and talk more of the stars. You have disappointed me with my creations. You couldn't even awake 0.000000000000%1 of your potential. So from now henceforth! You will fight for peace, for food, for safety! For whatever you desire! You must shed tears and blood for it!" With such a thunderous voice that shook the very room, Morningstar was in.
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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Replied to Murdda223

    yes, he will. oh, but it wouldn't be that easy since he will be hunt down most of the times which will limit his chance of growing 😹

    "20,000 or 200,000 thousand years have passed by since y'all were created. You have indeed advanced extensively. From the bottom of the food chain, you now are the rulers of the earth. But sadly you could barely reach the moon and talk more of the stars. You have disappointed me with my creations. You couldn't even awake 0.000000000000%1 of your potential. So from now henceforth! You will fight for peace, for food, for safety! For whatever you desire! You must shed tears and blood for it!" With such a thunderous voice that shook the very room, Morningstar was in.
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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Replied to RealDarkSeraph

    same with me 😹

    20 August 2023
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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    I'm having some issues my readers. it seems like Webnovel system has issue or it might be my phone. after updating and trying to read it on the app I discovered that most part seems like they weren't paragraphed or given space which I believed I did. please bear with me as I try reediting it. 😊

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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Replied to Christian_Mutima

    Yes, I was inspired by it 😁😊 but unlike how the MC overcomes his traumatic pass and becomes a hero, mine succumb to it and becomes a antihero.

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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Commented

    what do you all think of this chapter

    With both forces the zombie was not able to re-stand it as its head exploded, leaving blood and brain fluid spreading on Morningstar and Kofi
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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Commented

    This scene feels awkaward? what's your thoughts

    Ch 19 Chapter 19: Elites ll
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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Commented

    What do you think of how Morningstar and Kofi met? also is the fighting scene cool?

    Ch 18 Chapter 18: Morningstar mets Kofi
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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Replied to JBFIRE_77

    [img=In a daze]Alright 😊

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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Replied to JBFIRE_77

    I don't think I will put a romance though. The Romance will be a bit similar to RI (Renegade Immortal)

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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Posted

    I will like to shamelessly ask my dear readers, what do you think of this story? Does it lack certain vibe or the plot is boring?

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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Commented

    Is it supposed to be *Someone* instead of *somewhere*?

    "What… who are you?" Somewhere with a red hair color that was darker than Martin's hair came forward and pushed Martin back while Bill had released his hand from the iron grip.
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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Commented

    Is it supposed to be *Someone* instead of *somewhere*?

    "What… who are you?" Somewhere with a red hair color that was darker than Martin's hair came forward and pushed Martin back while Bill had released his hand from the iron grip.
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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Commented

    Is it supposed to be *Someone* instead of *somewhere*?

    "What… who are you?" Somewhere with a red hair color that was darker than Martin's hair came forward and pushed Martin back while Bill had released his hand from the iron grip.
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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Commented

    Yes!🔥 this is the type of school I love! hopefully the MC won't be a two goody shoe of a kind to spare his enemies 😊

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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Awesome, although the wordy explanation makes it a bit boring for me but I'm sure we about to get into the most exciting part as soon as he goes into that school! Can't wait !🔥🔥🔥

    Ch 6 GOING BACK TO SCHOOL
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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Replied to LIGht_Pen

    First chap sounds similar to DAWN IF A NEW WORLD and the few almost sound like Reincarnator... but from Ten upward is different 💜

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    I feel like the character development is slow. (My personal thoughts by the way 💜)

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  • Daoistf7YZbm
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    Replied to Its_Praveen

    Yes, I will be dropping daily update from now henceforth and thanks for the review. 💜

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