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Author... I think your work is good but you should really get an editor.
I think it's supposed to be after he lost his parents
This is bothering me since I had a friend review my work. The last part Alfonsi is pronounced si (yes in Spanish) not si (as in eyeball).
sibling math, I get it
That's hilarious, I'm using that.
Hmm, I really don't want to give too much away so all I'll say is that he will adapt a lot faster but it will still be frustrating to witness.
say sike right now...
5 starts, how presumptuous of me. Well, if you're looking for a book with immediate romance and you don't want to see the MC struggle with his sexuality... don't read this. Please have patience with the plot, it's on the slower side but I always get to where I need to go. I really just want the readers to fall into the world and enjoy the plot.
MC will never have CE, his ability is something else entirely. I hope that answers your question.