Nice, thanks for your feedback i will try my best to improve on those areas

I can say the novel is well written, the components which author is trying to show are amazing. The characters were portrayed very well. I am not a poetic person but still can relate to the poetic writing of the author. the emotion which were used are very vibrant and i must say author tried his best to portray the necessary emotion which make this work complete and realistic to the point where every person can feel the emotional outburst.Kudos to you

nice chapter. I can say from this i.e., you have improved as a writer. this novel has same potential as you, learn more,dive deeper, keep improving and go beyond.

really awesome story. the gentleness, simplicity,slice of live moment and nostalgia of this story can capture anyone's heart. author did a very outsatanding job by drawing the emotional essence of the story. Kudos to you

Glad to see you here

Very nice to read. I hope you update it weekly . The essence of the demonslayer you used is awesome. Well researched really enjoyed it.[img=update][img=recommend] this has a huge potential