Hans_1040

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Reading novels for almost 11 years. Enjoys well-written stories 😆

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Hans_10402 months ago
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Isn’t Denis on crutches?
Miguel reached the ball near the end line, cut inside, and crossed low. Arthur tried to finish the first time, but the Everton defender intercepted. The ball fell to Denis, who shot hard, but the opposing goalkeeper made a great save, sending it out for a corner.
Soccer System: All the Skills, One Player!
Sports · Palmer_1998
Hans_10406 months ago
Replied to Andrew_Edwards_0410
Ohhh. That’s why her name sounded familiar. LOL
'So it was you huh?' she mused, a malicious intent settling in her gut.
Rise To Stardom
Urban · Caeruleum_
Hans_10406 months ago
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I am not [leaving] yet.
" Don't worry child I will arrange for you." Follow Mei she will take care of your needs she said directing her maid to Xiao Xiao. A little apprehensive the little girl clutch onto Yan Jin. He patted her head and said "Its okay go, I am not living yet". Feeling a little reassured she left the room with the maid.
Legend of the Divine Archer
Fantasy · Judejayden
Hans_10406 months ago
Commented
The plot/concept of godly archer is unique enough.
In the waiting room Yan Jin was served a cup of tea, and Xiao Xiao some cookies. He could not help but think about how the process was so smooth and nice, he had imagined that he would be judged by his appearance and would have had to make a scene, "I guess all this novels on earth needed something to create shock value and content."
Legend of the Divine Archer
Fantasy · Judejayden
Hans_10406 months ago
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He couldn’t move his family… which family? It’s just the little girl and him.
He couldn't move his family during the day, so they joined the official route to help with the disguises. He asked Xiao Xiao to read the blacksmith book out loud after giving it to her. It was funny to see a blind beggar with a cane and a big bag on his back while a little kid read what looked like nonsense.
Legend of the Divine Archer
Fantasy · Judejayden
Hans_10406 months ago
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Fake speed. What is that…
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Legend of the Divine Archer
Fantasy · Judejayden
Hans_10406 months ago
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The teacher doesn’t act like a teacher. Plus isn’t this about basketball ? The author sounds like he has never played organized basketball . It’s so slow…
Basketball System: Rebound of the Underdog
Sports · SandKastle
Hans_10406 months ago
Commented
MC doesn’t even practice. He’ll probably get propped up by his stupid system.
Ch 33 Still The Same Old Thing
Basketball System: Rebound of the Underdog
Sports · SandKastle
Hans_10406 months ago
Commented
Can’t take any chances. But you were a first round exit the previous year…
Ch 29 I Can't Believe This
Basketball System: Rebound of the Underdog
Sports · SandKastle
Hans_10406 months ago
Posted
Well written. I love the chemistry between the characters. The lyrics are good, I only wish that I could hear them being sung. 😭
Rise To Stardom
Urban · Caeruleum_