NASIR_OP

its good read probably the best in regard of how a transmigrated person who know the plot change things like mc has the power of piller but he still choose his humanity also he doesn't just go around benefiting himself he also has a good humour 💞💞

please continue this fanfic it very good just one thing plz make mc a little more brave he is being pussy despite month training and despite having 4 cores

i must say this novel is good but i am stopping here bcz you ruined it here or maybe i am just to bored to read this part all was good but you just had to make family arc that long really also what the hell is mc so weak like really his cousin is already level 4 but he didn't even hit Level 4 in any of the profession really also what hell are you doing writing different Pov,s but not mentioning any character name also why of all people you pop up other things in fight than man Scenario like there was fight going on between MC and Headmaster of academy but then you decided to write whole chapter over Mc familiar spirit really weird

finally someone wrote a fanfic where Mc don't just cower Infront of nightmare creatures he just go and kill them and make his multiple soul cours really cool sunny is op ❤️❤️❤️

i would have loved this more but you don't actually change anything in this novel all the story is original just Leon replaced rudeus does that even make a difference also leon isn't even a proper Reincarnated individual so no i don't like it

haha 😂 that is true it is difficult to write Lotm fanfic by the way i hope you can write one

this fanfic should have been the best their was but Alas you ruined it bcz of few things first This was supposed to be Ayanokouji's Fanfic but you wrote scenes of Rudeus then his and the philosophy of ayanokouji you misunderstood he doesn't like to get a peaceful life yes he likes this kind of life but he know when and where to do things Right for example you don't even make him progress in 4 years really a letdown

this story would have been a good if you don't ruined the whole thing for example if you just Reincarnated a person who watched Mushoku tensei in a side character and then make him a little bit talented so that he can advance while he saves everyone also you could have made him a person who made redius a capable person the nightmare dungeon would have been his main point from where he became saint grade in all aspects you could have gone a lot more simpler but efficient way to make story progress but you ruined it sorry bro i Think its 4/10

i hope you continue this fanfic its very good and also your use of three cowardly pathways is fantastic 😍 love it and by the way bcz of not reading Tower of God this is whole new level of enjoyment for me ..... ....... i have a suggestion for you to write a new fanfic on LOTM .. i my self am not good at English so i don't dare to write a novel i hope you can write a fanfic based on these points ..... .. (1)make a wish fulfilment story about a mc who has read Lotm and other novels also make it seem like he was a quite accomplished man in his first life i think give him wishes like ... ...first wish he will have a modified pathways consisting of three pathways i hope you make him of three cowardly pathways bcz they are quite a combination also involve a extra characteristic of three pathways including read made potion so he just need ritual and acting methods ... (2)Give him a modified and extra made sefirah castle which includes benefit of him not getting corruption from outer deities it will protect him All the time from Outer deities but it will not protect him from will of celestial worthy and original creator so that mc may not look like a completely overpowered also it can hide him from 7 orthodox gods and our truly dangerous brothers Amon and Adam .. .... (3)Give the power to actually create a duplicate copy of any pathways characteristic or any beyonder artefacts but it will have limitations like he can create only 5 copies of any pathways characteristic also it will heavily depends on his sequence like he can make copies of sequence 8 characteristic when his S9 also this limitations will have to be Abide by until he reaches the level of a piller this ability will give him a chance to make his subordinates Also it will not disturb our Mr.fool pathway or his journey in any way And lastly make him transmigrate Some years before so that when Klein is transmigrates our mc will be 17 year old also plz try to make him Reincarnate from baby so that he will study very well and will make a name for himself and also earn money 🤑 A lot on his own not daddy money ..... ......... plz sir

it is such a simple thing but you just have to make is more complicated really man mc transmigrate into a body and has a most powerful quirk and also he has a good brain but out of all things he has to do is to become a vigilante really as you all know how Mha world works and also its rules are quite strict but that dumbass mc has to do is do the opposite of all people really also he has no Awareness how to do his job silently its fucking dumb