SpecialGrade123

😂😂😂 sorry

Akaza technique reversal has very boring outcomes but i will try so it can be interesting 👍

just enjoy bro i just write this fic for fun even i am not serious about it 😂

i am too lazy to do that man 😭 sorry

i Also hope

bro please start jjk arc Soon because i have read this story before at the end of Naruto arc after that you deleted the fanfic please i am dying to know how jjk will unfold

English is not my mother language 😃if you can understand it its cool if not then its ok i just wrote what my heart said

hello Author i am so happy to read a well made story today after so many days the power levels the hidden plot with our mc and the original mc the depths regarding soul emotion and the personality are well written the only issue i have with this novel is that you do not explain properly that how mana feels in body core how the stats actually feel like if one person jumps from 100 to 200 you just say that he got faster explain a little how much his physical ability increased and how much power he truly gained but all in all love u ❤

haha so he ate his maid and then told her his secret lol 😆 😂 🤣

first of all great work i really appreciate it but please when you write a story explain few things first how did the mc gain his power like in this you made mc the master of seals yes its a good concept but you just can't say that mc invented certain seal explain how he worked on it how much time he used what were the problems he faced second mc has been fighting jonin level characters but the way you wrote him feels like he is just a low level character who happened to just outsmart or took advantage of surprise factor it feels occurred please improve these Aspects