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Aniket_Kumar_1890

Aniket_Kumar_1890

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Just another fan of the Fictional world.

2023-09-09 JoinedIndia
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    Though this has a potential of becoming a pretty good fan fic if the author played the cards right but unfortunately, it got annoying after 30 chapters. Even though he already has a pre established excellent story and a huge information from fandoms and wiki, he is not using it at all, and he is trying making Hestia overly dumb, though she is a bit airhead still she is one of the most powerful goddess, she doesn't show it because she don't like flaunting her powers. And can you stop trying to fill the chapters with info dumb, every chapter after 30 th has half them containing useless information dumb. I know it my personal opinion as a webnovel reader having read hundreds of novels and fanfic, you have the potential you don't need to rush just one time read your own story, you find out yourself your weakness. thanks for the Fanfic

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