I DIDN'T EXPECT THAT U WILL PUBLISH ANOTHER NOVEL, ANYWAYS YOUR NEW NOVEL IS GREAT AND ALSO YOU!!

THIS NOVEL WAS GREAT AND ALSO THE AUTHOR. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO OTHER READERS HOPE YOU ALL YOU ENJOY THIS NOVEL STORY. ONCE AGAIN, AUTHOR, I REALLY LIKE YOUR NOVEL STORY THIS IS MUCH GREAT!!

IT SEEMS THIS CHAPTER WAS ALL THE ELEMENTS BELONG SO I THINK THIS ONE IS COOL TOO;!

THIS CHAPTER 21 AIR ELEMENTAL WAS GREAT. SINCE I'M PLAYING AN ROBLOX WHICH IS THE ELEMENTAL BATTLE GROUND. SO THIS IS DEFINETLY GOOD CHAPTER!!! GREAT AUTHOR

I DON'T THINK WHAT I'M GONNA SAY TO THIS CHAPTER... AUTHOR I'M GLADLY SUPPORT YOUR NOVELS AT ALL!! GREAT JOB!!

I SEE MY INSTECT WAS RIGHT TOLD YA. HAHAHAAHA YOU'RE A GREAT AUTHOR I LIKE YOUR NOVELS!!!

THE TRIAL OF FIRE MAGIC POWER? I THINK THE NEXT CHAPTER ON IT WAS GONNA, THE TRIAL OF WATER??

I HAVE NO COMMENTS ON THIS CHAPTER. JUST GREAT

THEIR TRIAL HAS BEGUN THIS ONE WAS COOL HEHE

OKAY SO FIRST OF ALL THIS NOVEL IS GREAT, AND I CAN HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS BECAUSE THE PLOT TWIST IS GOOD. BUT THR PROBLEM HERE IS THERE'S NO CHAPTER 10. WHERE DID IT GO??

OKAY NO COMMENTS FOR THIS. THIS IS FANTASTIC

Bro on this chapter i can't understand what is the plot twist, and also i didn'y understand their situation. I hope you can fix it right away.. But i like the settings hehe

will on this chapter all i can say is their journey was great and also their power!!

WOW! BRO YOU'VE GOT A MORE THAN 3000 WORDS IN CHAPTER 1. AMAZING!!

All i can say to your novel book is so great, and the plot twist catch up on me. That's all i want you to continue your journey, i'm sure one day you will become a professional WRITER. Good job!!

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