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fowlerdd7hCommentedSimultaneously a sociopath and a Neanderthal. Wow what a great character
"Seems like the carrot and stick trick works quite effectively," Lu Zhen thought, as he sneered. Although he knew how its principles worked he didn't know if it worked or not in real life but seeing the scene now he was quite confident it worked.- fowlerdd7hCommentedCh 32 Aura
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He definitely did scam them tho? For like no reason? I think they have a right to be angry
"Damn it, that scoundrel took advantage of us," Lu Qiang muttered with resentment. Sometimes, regardless of rational understanding, the feeling of injustice lingers – blaming others for one's weaknesses and nursing anger at being the supposed victim of their own shortcomings. - fowlerdd1dCommented
Comically bad first line for a main character but I’ll give this book a chance still (:
"Looks like I have really transmigrated to this world." - fowlerdd2dCommented
Finally an author who understands!
Honesty is the key to harmony with women. - fowlerdd5dCommented
Yes it fits perfectly, much better for a priestess than fist fights
Do you like these types of conversations? I think it fits well with the kind of story I am writing. - fowlerdd5dCommented
It was fun but it definitely goes against the whole priestess aesthetic of the Fire Keeper
So, what do you think of the fight scene in it? - fowlerdd5dCommented
The punch was cringe sorry
What do you think about the fight scene here? I want opinions on this. - fowlerdd5dCommented
Pretty good, but it could use some more detailed descriptions
What do you think of the fight scene here? Is it better or worse? - fowlerdd5dCommented
This chapter was great! (:
What do you think of this chapter? - fowlerdd5dReplied to fowlerdd
If you had somehow implied through your writing that someone was going to be saved or become a hero, only to subvert expectations and then turn them into a villain, that’s good authorship. What you did was just cheap and amateurish. Which is sad because you’ve got an absolutely amazing premise here and some good character development aside from this part.
How do you like this 'plot twist'? - fowlerdd5dCommented
You asked readers to give their opinions on who should be saved and then didn’t save who they chose. The fact that you interacted with readers directly to do this means it was not a plot twist, you simply deliberately misled them. So no I did not like it.
How do you like this 'plot twist'? - fowlerdd5dCommented
I wish the author wouldn’t do this. Please stop naming random dragons Alduin and random guys from BB Gehrman. All it does is lead readers to speculate about the implications only for you to let them down later when you say it’s just a coincidence.
You can't choose Gehrman as the only similarity with the one from bloodborne is the name and he is already dead. - fowlerdd5dCommented
It’s generally not a good idea to repeat phrases multiple times in the same paragraph (unless it’s for emphasis but that’s a bit advanced stuff when writing starts to get poetic).
"Nobody died in this war. So, if thou wish for redemption, it is not too late yet. If thou wishes to be recognized by thy kin, thou needn't start a war, I suggest thee to accept thyself and the rest will follow. Thou needn't play tricks to get accepted. Seek strength and the rest will follow. I know that this sounds absurd, but people would rather follow a strong and brave king rather than a weak and tricky one. Seek strength and the rest will follow." - fowlerdd6dCommented
Ok but the fact that he did it in such a casual impersonal way is worse. You do get how that’s worse, right?
Did I feel bad about ordering the death of Weiss's father or just having someone killed in general? Honestly not at all. For one it's not like I took a knife to the man and tore him apart. It was almost like watching a movie in how it was such a distant event. To say nothing about how the man was an utter scumbag which also affected my care of the situation. - fowlerdd6dCommentedCh 166 The Corp Is Resisting
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I’m both horrified and impressed at how long this run-on sentence is lol
"What? What's going on with the Darkzone?" I asked confused as I didn't really know much of anything about the Darkzone and neither did YoRHa as the Android Resistance Army's divisions stationed there were highly insular and rarely made contact with the 'Lit World' and what little YoRHa had of the place was a biological hellscape of beings twisted by Maso and forced into nightmarish forms that lived far longer lives than they should and had various abilities that made them highly dangerous which is why the whole Florida creatures mutating is so terrifying to YoRHa as they think that the mutated Maso creatures are adapting to get past their one weakness of the sunlight dissipating the Maso holding their bodies together. - fowlerdd8dCommented
Expect a Christian to have actually read the Bible and you will always be disappointed
With this said, the Dvrakian President immediately contacted the regional power which had vassalized them. Unlike the Dvrakians, who appeared to be the physical incarnation of demons, the Regional Power, which were their masters, appeared as if they were angels. With pale white skin, long golden hair, matching eyes, and large fluffy wings. The Enochian Theocracy were as beautiful and as majestic as the angels of the Christian religion. - fowlerdd8dCommented
I really hope the dramatic irony gets toned down at some point. It’s kind of funny sometimes but there’s still a lot of stuff we don’t know about Amber and I feel it adds unnecessary tension to the story. Also it doesn’t really feel like they’re in a real relationship because of all the lying and hiding things.
Ch 159 That's Not Her Blood