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Yes

You are useing his name too often use more first person. Still enjoyable.

Yes

It’s Taylor

Escalation

Feels like one of those bystander povs from jojo where they explain the effects of the attack. Nice

This story has you constantly wishing for a happy ending but always kicking you in the balls. Also the way gods and other powerful beings keep watching him and manipulating fate against him just hurts so much. Other than that it still makes me keep reading and hoping for a happy ending. I hope at some point we get to see him take revenge against the world and other powerful beings that are manipulating him.

He should be smart enough to tell that the village is scamming him though also shouldn’t a clan as big as his own a number of businesses in the village even if everyone was killed that doesn’t mean non clan workers were killed

Right I forgot how popular he was before people meet him

I bet being a scribe is like writing magic into the world and once it’s been used everyone can use it if they are taught How