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Crunchy_Sgt

Crunchy_Sgt

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2023-09-03 JoinedGlobal
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to Taste_The_Rainbow_8941

    Might be because I'm writing on my phone. I'll see if I might in the market for one next chapter.

    Ch 9 Rescue
    Marvel: Shazam Mutant
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to ErozothDraeor

    Thanks, I'll make sure the details match going on.

    Ch 9 Rescue
    Marvel: Shazam Mutant
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to ErozothDraeor

    Thanks, I'll make sure the details match going on.

    Ch 9 Rescue
    Marvel: Shazam Mutant
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to Uncanny7

    It's basically a blank check. He has to collect his own knowledge instead of inheriting it.

    Now, the biggest cash cow might be Tony Stark. He had been kidnapped by a terrorist cell in Afghanistan and being forced to make Jericho missiles for the cell. Now that he thought about it, Jericho missiles are a fucking genius idea. A missile that can cluster bomb is just heaven sent, no wonder they would just spit on the money Obadiah Stane provided them. If they have one of those and release it in New York, it will be the worst terrorist attack ever, 7-11 would be a kid's party compared.
    Marvel: Shazam Mutant
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to Rex_Zatch

    Jarvis is a whole library full of knowledge and if you want to succeed in life, knowledge comes first.

    Now, the biggest cash cow might be Tony Stark. He had been kidnapped by a terrorist cell in Afghanistan and being forced to make Jericho missiles for the cell. Now that he thought about it, Jericho missiles are a fucking genius idea. A missile that can cluster bomb is just heaven sent, no wonder they would just spit on the money Obadiah Stane provided them. If they have one of those and release it in New York, it will be the worst terrorist attack ever, 7-11 would be a kid's party compared.
    Marvel: Shazam Mutant
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to EtherealStar

    Chapter one, I just couldn't get past it

    Online Game 10,000 Times Buff At The Beginning!
    Video Games · Zero_D_Darkness
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Commented

    I know I might seem mean, but this guy has the gall to say to us that we should tell him about any Grammar mistakes!

    Ch 1 Awakening
    Spiderman with Ultimate login System
    Anime & Comics · Spider33
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to ErozothDraeor

    It's more cautionary than he wanted the money back.

    Ch 6 I Want My Money
    Marvel: Shazam Mutant
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Posted

    This fanfic is just hot garbage. The author seems not to know the powers of a kryptonian thus feels the need to add more powers already! I just couldn't get past chapter six due to this

    MARVEL: SILVER SUPERMAN OF ASGARD
    Anime & Comics · Shirokendama
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to Taste_The_Rainbow_8941

    It's gonna be important later on.

    "This is a test to check the preliminaries of my powers. Powered by the living lightning, I know I have the wisdom of Solomon, strength of Hercules, stamina of Atlas, power of Zeus, courage of Achilles and the speed of Mercury. What I will be testing my my strength, speed both running and flying speed and durability," Tristan said while facing the camera before he looked a wrecked car he had carried here.
    Marvel: Shazam Mutant
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to ANANTA

    I want my mc to have his own knowledge. so, the wisdom of Solomon will be giving him mental acuity at the supernatural level. No hereditary memories, he will have to build his own.

    Ch 5 Testing Gone Wrong
    Marvel: Shazam Mutant
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Commented

    Honestly, I just think Joker is an avatar of the great darkness at this point. Hate to say it, bit Jim is gonna have to hope Batman is in the mood

    So yeah, Jim Gordon would have to walk it off because I'm not going anywhere near the deranged piece of shit unless I had a guaranteed method to put him down for good. Not to cripple or kill him but to fully erase his existence.
    The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)
    Anime & Comics · Wicked132
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to Apathy_Personified

    Never

    "I BESTOW UPON YOU THE LIVING LIGHTNING. WITH THIS FORM, YOU BE BLESS WITH THE WISDOM OF SOLOMON, THE STRENGTH OF HERCULES, THE STAMINA OF ATLAS, THE POWER OF ZEUS, THE COURAGE OF ACHILLES AND THE SPEED OF MERCURY. I DECLARE YOU NO MORTAL!"
    Marvel: Shazam Mutant
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to Lycarus

    No harem or the sort

    Ch 1 Living Lightning
    Marvel: Shazam Mutant
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Posted

    This fanfic is just...chef's kiss. The author has not spared any detail to the wind and his story telling just let's you have a vivid picture of what he's writing about. The only issue is updating but with the book's quality, I can't complain

    DC: The Authority
    Anime & Comics · MasterReigen
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to ErozothDraeor

    No rock of eternity. I know it's an important place but I am thinking that the living lightning will be all he needs to eventually become a truly broken character.

    Ch 1 Living Lightning
    Marvel: Shazam Mutant
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to Chezebrelephaffe01

    No transformation. This is his default form. So no reliance on uttering the word Shazam in order to access his power.

    Ch 1 Living Lightning
    Marvel: Shazam Mutant
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to Im_u

    let's not forget this ben guy just walking all over him!

    Game of Thrones : King Peter
    TV · DR_ELFWAL
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to Username48399
    Ch 3 Revenge
    Marvel: Shazam Mutant
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  • Crunchy_Sgt
    Crunchy_Sgt8mth
    Replied to Abeeba

    Mc's not a villian. His actions might be morally grey but he will not be a villian. Thus the lack of the tag. I don't think I am motivated enough to write a villain mc.

    Ch 3 Revenge
    Marvel: Shazam Mutant
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