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Mann_Teufortian2hCommentedCh 224 A Dance to Remember- Mann_Teufortian2hCommentedCh 688 Chapter 687 Susanoo: Tsukumo
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that's what I've been saying, quit your job!
However, Logan was more concerned about doing his own thing. And after becoming a Captain, he would definitely be constrained in some ways. That is the main reason for Logan's worries. - Mann_Teufortian1dCommentedCh 687 Chapter 686 Dad, You Understand Me The Best
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beating your kids, a time honored Asian tradition
Hearing the sound of fierce beating from upstairs, Minato's mood immediately become better. - Mann_Teufortian1dCommented
seriously, what is it? I can't remember what it is, if it even existed in the original manga to begin with
'Danzo's plan… that mysterious Gozu Tenno, has been completed and started being implemented?!' - Mann_Teufortian1dCommented
the strongest genjutsu in the world
Naruto's head starts to be filled with bumps. Although he has been criticized by Kushina, he gets more and more courageous. He uses his Talk-no-Jutsu to apologizes and also tries his best to act cute! - Mann_Teufortian1dCommentedCh 223 The Trap is Set
- Mann_Teufortian2dCommentedCh 222 Jade-like Beauties
- Mann_Teufortian2dCommented"Without anything to cover your windows, I pity the next person who'll look inside your house," cooed Pansy insincerely. "They'll be forced to look at your mother."
- Mann_Teufortian2dCommentedJade-like Beauties
- Mann_Teufortian2dCommentedCh 686 Chapter 685 Why Do You Say 'Again'?
- Mann_Teufortian3dCommentedCh 77 Chapter 77 Ghost of Uchiha
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for good reason!
"The mind of Tobirama and possible potential like Hashirama; that's the deadliest combination" Said Madara in a serious tone, its true he hated tobirama but that doesn't mean he doesn't acknowledge the genius he was. - Mann_Teufortian3dCommentedCh 685 Chapter 684 What Nonsense Are You Talking About?
- Mann_Teufortian3dCommentedCh 221 Preparations Complete
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interesting concept, but extremely repetitive. MC feeds on low level mutant rejects to build up her strength for a hundred chapters. The MC spends a bit of time being trained by shield, before ditching them to continue feeding on mutants on a larger scale. There's a lot of spelling mistakes. There's also a glaring pothole that the author tried to fill early, but the way it's fixed doesn't make any sense: eating dirt and rocks can gain MC "mass" so that she can evolve and create minions at first, but it's then nerfed: the more she feeds on something, she gets diminishing returns, which makes no sense because of the law of conservation of mass. out also means that her growth is massively unsustainable, and she'll rapidly reach her growth limit before consuming everything on the planet. basically, this story only needs an actual storyline, coherent lore and some proofreading to be great
- Mann_Teufortian3dCommentedCh 97 Chapter 97 - Easy Victory
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espicelally
Due to this she had little experience with personally controlling or dealing with the backlash that was brought about by the mental feedback of the Hive Units being connected to her mind— espicessly in such a large amount. - Mann_Teufortian3dCommentedShe fought valiantly— killing over 5 of the Swarmlings before she was simply overwhelmed by their large amount and covered in wounds. Their hard body and hair granted them a natural defense— and by using their hard strands of hair as needles it even granted them a means of offense.