Chaotic_Order

if only you show character's damage power better. that would be so much better to actually understand what type of minimum power of destruction we talking about when smth like God of war fights, or God kings fight or primordial God fights. this novel really doesnt do a good job in that regard.

make the narrator reliable smh. ngl deadarse feels like a way to cover your track if you mess the story up.

would rather prefer you list some of them since as readers we dont even know the total number of concepts in the cosmology either? is it infinite? then are there both infinitely many positive and negative concepts?

this would inturn imply there would be more outergods ? but how azathoth is barely a child in this novel. this statement feels useless.

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

this is a good fanfic but a pity, it seems author has dropped it. more then 20 days and no new chapter.

You should describe the side characters more to make the novel more immersive, you didn't introduce the characters of mc mother and father much neither any of his clan mates, and damn the time skips

arisu would be much better pair if you want to keep the 'villain' and 'evil' version of 8man intact, she can actually assist him in crushing other classes. ichinose would be a complete failure in the class point arc with her relief measure to save everyone. she is simply not a good pick for someone like 8man.