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Idk if the Author just decided to only use AI, but around Chapter 90-100 the story stops progressing. I read up until 140 and realized the last 50 chapters could’ve been skipped and I literally wouldn’t have missed anything. Its just constant relationship stuff without even progressing the actual relationship.
Is this taking a break?
GYAAAAAAT
Below average. Tired of these generic novels where the protagonist hides and doesn’t actually do anything. This one has the added bonus of a confusing, non-intuitive power system where everything has multiple names for some reason. The characters are also pretty bad, with a lack of personality. Only in certain scenes does the author remember that personality is a thing, and then proceeds to forcefully insert it.
Damn
Average. Chapters are filled with filler upon filler, I think each chapter only has around 100 words of content. And everything is forced. The author is really bad at story telling so he forces the characters to make dumb choices. It’d be fine if this was done subetly, but combined with all the filler this is super noticeable and frustrating. For example, lets say you’re sneaking into the enemy territory with a treasure. You would bring a container to hide the treasure, right? Nope, not according to the author. According to them you only realize you’re even in enemy territory AFTER you’ve been caught.
AI, its that simple. Really tired of these.
I’ll add this: if you haven’t started this yet, don’t. Its one of those novels that leaves you with frustration rather than satisfaction.