Unfortunately running a side story on Joey as a girl turned me off to the point I skipped everything around that and focused on Taryn Jamie and Shaya. I think if I need to pay to read a chapter and half it is about Joey and a story that is not much in line with the main story it starts to feel like a rip off. The fact the writer keeps forgetting / mistaking he and she in characters and writing their own character names wrong is a turn off. Jamie is clearly a girl but the constant mistake of naming her a He is embarrassing from the writers part. I have skipped a bunch of chapters to fast forward through the storyline to see how it ends and that’s about as much I will do. I also don’t like the whole privilege writing stuff that the app now introduced so it’s safe to say I will stepping away from this app and the writers who decide to use privilege membership to add chapters

It’s the first time I regret presuming so many chapters.. I find the character in the start of the story very easy to deal with but after a while trinity just becomes a snob with the constant Reminder how rich she is and how much expensive stuff she has and the constant bagging down of her partner almost every chapter is so disgusting. Yeah he was an asshole but gosh didn’t he apologise and suffer enough for now? Do you need to constantly bring up the same stuff when the guy is trying his heart out but to non stop beat him down? I felt after the first storyline before all the substories came out it was a reasonable read but everything after that just becomes a show of how trinity runs the story as the almighty rich bit** and I don’t think I will even read the chapters I already paid for because I just get put off reading it

I really feel like this story deserves a 2nd book!❤️