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Really interesting story. The synopsis did feel a little lacking but I loved the vivid imagery the author created in this story. The plot seems quite good so far despite it only being two chapter. I want to know more, especially how the codex book works. Can't wait to see more chapters published.

Love the descriptions!

Thank you for the review. Shall work on the magic description

Once again, the great author Seraph has done it, writing an amazing story that instantly draws you in. Within the first five chapters alone, you have action, suspense and a rollercoaster of emotions. Honestly I can't wait to see what's in store next for this story. World-building is great and the plot so far is intriguing. I really want to see how the characters got to chapter 1's pov. Anyway keep up the good work!

Really great start. Can't wait to see where this goes.