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Kori_3mthReplied to dethrophesain't that just god in another language?
[Authority :: Deus Time Control (Rank ?!?) used]- Kori_4mthReplied to Yohan_Sqvnjrgld
moondoggy goes hard
June wanted to lie down already. Can the mentors wait until tomorrow to tell them whatever it is they're going to tell? - Kori_4mthReplied to Felix_Brownie
ngl, this music gave off country vibes
Gonna show the world, watch me reach my goal." - Kori_4mthCommented"I am Ren."
- Kori_4mthReplied to Konk3y_Dong
NOoOOo
June nodded. "Yes," he said. "I like cats." - Kori_4mthReplied to Undirectedwriter
depending on how you want your story to be, you should consider focusing mainly on character pov or narrator, if you would look at my novel its a bit different but its mostly on the character pov(what they do, see) if you go to a more sci-fi story-type, with a plot based on human experiments and such, its best to have a narrator type in my opinion aswell with text bubbles of course, sinc eit would get boring too fast with only descriptive text, good job!
- Kori_4mthReplied to JetLord004Author note: the story starts in chapter 1. The prologue introduces the MC and explains his background. Feel free to skip it if you are not interested, but as the author, I recommend reading it.
- Kori_4mthPosted
Its a bit dark but its kinda alright, its pretty easy to understand for me and this gave off game cutscenes vibes, the story atleast theres way more parts where describes what he sees and do than any text, i suppose this story is going to reveal things with the chapters ongoing, but its not entirely bad.
- Kori_4mthPosted
Welcome! this novel is a WSA entry, in the making of this i aimed to achieve a connection of mystery and magic; I think i did a relatively good job in writing quality and concept, even thought im not the best, but i want to hear you guys! If you notice any misspelling or grammatical mistake, point it out im not perfect, Good reading! Commenting on a chapter really help me, consider doing that!
This book has been deleted. - Kori_4mthReplied to Shattering_
Bro is spitting some facts about jjk, gege is listening.
This book has been deleted. - Kori_5mthReplied to loashf
I pretend making this story going around two protagonist however in the future there isnt going to have this perspective change, i hope you can continue to support me!
This book has been deleted. - Kori_9mthReplied to Nobody_0wens
his father is anos and his mother is rimuru, simple and fast.
"Don't play dumb, how did you manage to hide your Mana." Kate asked with a slightly annoyed tone, "It's impossible without Mana to surpass the human limit, yet you managed to get scores far higher than mine, someone with Mana, without it? Do you think that makes sense?" - Kori_9mthReplied to Sinmon
my 5 yo brother had one but he broke it
"If it's 2014 then I must be 5 years old."