DaoistYoursTruly

the "raw" ai

I'm starting to lose hope in the webnovel community. So many good reviews about this one, praising the "good" writing style and quality. Following this, I had very high expectations, and well, it couldn't deliver. AI Slop. That's what this novel is. The writing is abysmally bad—stretching, word filler, flowery vocabulary, AI word choices, and so on. It's nearly impossible to immerse oneself in this; I had to drop it 10 chapters in. This isn't an anomaly. The author's other books are the same. They aren't slow; they're filled with filler and reek of LLM. Perhaps an interesting story lies beneath the mask of pretense, but I couldn't get through it. And don't misunderstand me. I don't mind authors using LLM to edit their grammar, spelling, and similar mistakes, but in this case, it's clear that the author wants as many words per chapter as possible. Once again, I was disappointed.

Netori is a subcategory of NTR. So yes, it is still NTR, just the "good" version, as many like to call it. This is actually quite controversial. Imagine letting a girl join your harem who left her happy marriage for you. That's a real slut.

who said this is a smut novel? there is no smut tag here, and the sypnosis does NOT say it either. So where do you get the idea from, that it is a smut novel?

Yeah. Author has nice ideas, but it feels like he trew his raw text into an ai and let it fill the chapters.

damn she is hot

I must admit, my heart blossomed when I found you again. A year ago, when life was hard, you were my only spirit animal, keeping me going. The sheer negativity emitted from you transcended the monitor, always warming my heart and giving me a good laugh. Please continue, and don't let other people change your mindset.

And then he woke up

I will though!

Stand tall, we are proud!