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confirmed this is just a copy past of the origin hp story dropped.

one of the better Starwars/HP stories to come out. just waiting for Harry to have a corvette in his pocket just fore those quick getaways.

nice work

More star wars is needed. I'm kind of over the star trek stuff. Feels like a episode recap with a lightsabre fixing all the problems.

he should have used his spell he used on all the camara and stuff at the start

can we get past this bs mc already, he got his reality check. Now he need to learn and grow. the padawan arc is painful to read

So he going through a stupid teen faze,(lets hope) this grow up into a knight faze, is hard to read. Mc is so stupid, arrogant and makes mistakes with all his foreknowledge.

Wow the Mc is so dumb, A adult soul suffering form dumb teen syndrome. Spending to much time in his head after saying he will learn everything stubbornly. Using a stealth ship as a patrol craft. Next thing you know he going to try fight Shive with a light sabre without using the force. Lets hope it's just a dumb teen thing.

torments suck 50 chapter of boring fluff, hope this is the only one,. all this build up to just plot amour to a win.

meeh shit try, she still left mc with a shit reason that a lie, now trying to make a sad story.