AnzacKiwiAstrix

took nearly 100 chapters to get past the "first movie" arc, hope we do have to suffer through creepy pre teen romance.

these song chapter just see pointless, the story seem to be far to slow pace. we got 60 chapters in and still making the first movie spattered with many side arcs. and now we get a young master face slap. juggling to many arc make it feel like he going to be 11 for 100+ chapters

What, this is so young master. It ruins the whole drawn-out movie making arc. Is this story going to force a long ass "teenage years" story making every creepy.

drop a country on the Sunset Sea far away from both Westeros and yi ti. It could be any fantasy or country you want. maybe a story of a lost prince or king goes missing in the Bermuda Tringale while traveling with a treasure fleet ending in a land in the middle of the Sunset Sea, then become a new boggy man in the eyes of Westeros

stop using chapter as your random thought and bs things. it a chapter for F sake use it for what it is

half the chapters in the start feel more like a Meg FF than one about the mc. .............................................................

feeling more like a meg FF that the mc. it really not appalling

noo not the child bait. Lilly is just wrong on all levels

so is this another paint by number retelling of the original, overly not worth the brain cells

Hope C3po gets a assassin protocol to get rid of it nagging and fretting. Then R2d2 and him can become middle men while he's in the temple. and all the temple droid he can co-op to other tasks