Intruging to say the least. Great writing with a few typos.

I think she is really a lucky kitty . Great writing.

Very very hot

Interesting and intriguing first chapter . I am hoping to read about how it came to this point .

😊 so sweet

He is really a great man

Yahsan is at least being a good man and husband taking care of his wife.

It’s okay so far I’m wondering how he’s going to handle this

Karma ?

I think they are good old friends that have each others backs.

Really starting to get better and more intriguing. 👍👍👍👍👌👌👌❤️❤️

This poor angel seems to keep going from bad to worse. Is she going to have any true good luck?

I hope Celeste can find some peace with these people at least for a little while longer than she did with the merfolks. I am loving the writers imagination and story telling.

I am loving the story so far especially since Kole and Celeste seems to be the truly unselfish ones of the story.

Kudos for Kole and maybe even some for his mom. Very interesting read.

Well now they are just cold blooded and selfish. To think they want to just kill a child is just wrong.

I would love to be Nora in this chapter. Great writing.

Steamy and hot

Now getting very interesting

I am confused, why is Lulla called a dead man?