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What about the maids?

Rate it like any other story. I mean it doesn’t matter who wrote the story as long as you like or dislike it. Not like the author stole it from someone. Or would you say that it depends on the person who wrote the story if it is good or bad? for example if a cute girl writes a story does it make it automatically better than if an ugly uncle wrote it?

All might weights like 220kg I think

Nut Gunray Hahahaha

The grammar is dreadful the story itself is good but it is just a waste because you can’t read it without getting a headache. The characters are your typical harem girls I guess. I hope it will get better.

Take my 2 daily powerstones! Just take them all from poor me.

The story is nice and the original characters are well thought out. Sometimes I feel that the value of certain items is really screwed but what can you do about it not like there is a pokemon shopping simulator or something for refference. I also like that there is a lot of teambuilding and the different Pokemon that grow together with the Farm. All in all a must read for Pokemon Fanfictionfans who like slice of life inbetween battles and adventures.

Well the original story has 4 mil words I think and at some point when he is to old to get it up or something it is about one of his sons who has forcepowers. Also If you are into this kind of stuff you should check out in a perverted galaxy far far away that’s some degenerate shit I tell you.

It is really funny

Nice read it has a good balance between romance, action and just chill with the girls. Maybe he should get a friend who can banter that will not end up wanting to get in his pants. I mean even guys who sleep around a lot tend to have a lot of friends. At least that’s what I think after 28h without sleep but it could also be the lack of sleep. Keep up the good work👌