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You are an idiot! You think hiding it won’t be worse in the end? And you apparently like the abuse you keep putting yourself through because it hasn’t benefited anybody by the Lockwood family.
You never held your son….
What?!?! Doesn’t evil have the scars that he has literally seen???
When did Evelyn become his people???
This sentence contradicts itself
Shouldn’t it say cousin or brother as they were saying in previous chapters? How did he become his uncle?
Without a full chapter it should have been free
Why exactly do you need to say he put each leg into His pants like we don’t know He has to put his pants on both legs 🙄 get that word count anyway you can right? It’s bad enough you out your notes to readers in the first part of the chapter. No one cares who else gave you a golden ticket and if they did they could look in authors notes where that should be. This is so disrespectful to your readers