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KylePower

KylePower

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I'm a high school boy writing a book 📖I like writing in First Person.

2023-08-31 JoinedAustralia
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  • KylePower
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    Replied to Zach_Curry

    Greatest magic

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  • KylePower
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    Replied to Abhav_Gupta

    Thanks...

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  • KylePower
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    Replied to TheRandomEpicNoob

    Actual fax

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  • KylePower
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    Replied to TheRandomEpicNoob

    Edited, does it still make sense?

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  • KylePower
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    Replied to TheRandomEpicNoob

    done!

    They don't need someone like you.
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  • KylePower
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    Hi, I'm the Author of this book. I want to first say that I appreciate all of your continued support for this book🙏. To my dedicated readers, I appreciate all your feedback and the time you've given to this story in order for me to improve. This novel was started 3 years ago as a passion project and I will continue doing so. This book that I'll be writing will have a mix of action, romance, adventure and mystery. There's a lotta lore behind this, so feel free to investigate or search terms up yourself if you don't understand anything. PS: Marcus and Clara say Hello! 👋

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  • KylePower
    KylePower9mth
    Replied to Daniel_Twigger

    Stoked to hear your impression! I'll work hard so sit tight!

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  • KylePower
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    Replied to Zach_Curry

    consider it done

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  • KylePower
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    Replied to Zach_Curry

    We all agree

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  • KylePower
    KylePower9mth
    Replied to Zach_Curry

    Thanks for spotting that

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  • KylePower
    KylePower9mth
    Replied to Zach_Curry

    Sorry could you explain a bit more?

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  • KylePower
    KylePower9mth
    Replied to Zach_Curry

    Thanks for the feedback

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  • KylePower
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    Replied to Christopher_Tang

    You're too good at finding these

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  • KylePower
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    Replied to Christopher_Tang

    Thanks for pointing that out 😅

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  • KylePower
    KylePower9mth
    Replied to TAN_ZI_HENG

    Thank you for your feedback! I appreciate you pointing out my awkward diction in some contexts. I'll be working hard to improve on this aspect! I hope you enjoyed my book.

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  • KylePower
    KylePower9mth
    Replied to Christopher_Tang

    Thank you for your feedback! I'm very grateful and will continue to work on my mistakes. I hope you have a good time reading!

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  • KylePower
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    Replied to DaoistlXvDAF

    Haha. Thanks so much for the advice. I do think that the first few chapters are kind of word-packed... I'll probably cut the word count just a bit. Thanks for your feedback! 🙏

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