I liked the main charecter of this story the world building is great can't wait for more chapters. only problem is it's too lengthy per chapter i mean yes it's your choice to write how much ever you want but keeping it less lengthy is also not bad also try to use simple words more instead of complicated words keep the words more simple.

Thank you. More chapters will be coming so please keep supporting me and enjoy the story.

plz do check my novel too. there are around 19 chapters and more are coming.

well if you want you can read my novel it's ongoing there are around 19 chapters.