Cesar_Lloclla

Well, I have to honestly say that this is one of the best works I have read in all the time I have been on this page. The subject matter you included and its origin are something I have not seen others replicate. It is something new that I thank you for sharing with everyone.

I am surprised and pleased to read your story, partly because the concept is different from others I have read on this page, it has a well-established beginning for a medieval setting. I just hope that when you introduce innovations they are not too radical, since having the knowledge of something does not imply being a master at it, unless it is complemented with practical experience.

I have already realized that this is not for me, the initial idea of ​​the work is good but over time things get mixed up too much and it is noticeable that you are trying to give a work different from the others but I do not like the development that the story takes. Even so, I thank you for publishing your work.