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Well, I have to honestly say that this is one of the best works I have read in all the time I have been on this page. The subject matter you included and its origin are something I have not seen others replicate. It is something new that I thank you for sharing with everyone.
I am surprised and pleased to read your story, partly because the concept is different from others I have read on this page, it has a well-established beginning for a medieval setting. I just hope that when you introduce innovations they are not too radical, since having the knowledge of something does not imply being a master at it, unless it is complemented with practical experience.
I have already realized that this is not for me, the initial idea of the work is good but over time things get mixed up too much and it is noticeable that you are trying to give a work different from the others but I do not like the development that the story takes. Even so, I thank you for publishing your work.