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    Replied to Drevart_Craft

    Super similar with Beward of Chicken. Read that one

    Cultivator's Slice of Life: Spiritual Farming System
    Fantasy · BigToad
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    Majority of readers/reviewers probably left a review before finishing upto chapter 30 to 40 at least. Which I might say was the best part o the read for me from chap 1. For writing quality, Author is good. Except with the forced romance or harem thats awkward. Very bad for me I wish author didnt force it if he cant do it. Feels little cringey too me. He says hes subtle with it, how can that be when hes basically shoving it on everyones throat that a romance is going to happen for at least 20 chaps? And character interaction regarding this? Very horrible. Friends pushing a girl towards you, understandable. It happens. But girls' parents? Its not even being subtle. And Mc being "as if" smug about it. Feels annoying to me. Ehhhh just didnt sit well with me with my expectation of slice of life, relaxin and slowlife. Everythings happening too fast. Updating stability. Very fine. Good worm author thanks for working hard. Story development. Hmmmm based on my preference, feels cringy to me. Maybe because I read this with an expectations and it failed me. Maybe i got used to fanfics like Hard enough or When is a spoon a sword? This fanfic thats promised realism turn out to be bshitting works of wish fulfillment for the author. Evidence of that is the number of pokemon the mc got, his so called scientific discoveries and the building harem. Only in 3 years? And evolutions thats easier than passing the midterm exam. Evolutions happen too fast. Author made everythig easy for MC. Too fast even. Theres no chill at all. Character design. For the MC, I liked him but I eventually got irritated starting with the budding romance. At first it felt like he was dense or something and then few chaps later, theyre already a thing. Dafuq. If you cant make a good romance, dont make one. Its so fake and dry. You made him look "cool and smug" on that aspect that it made it feel like author was imagining himself to be pete. Right. That smirk profpic of yours give it away. Youve got that personality dont you. World Backround. Lets put it at 3 stars. Honestly my impression of this world at first was a little bit dark. The not so child friendly pokemon world. So i expected mc to make a contrast with that . Like a slice of life fluff mc in a bit cold pokemon world. But MC's consecutive "sucessess" on the big things rather than the slice of life small aspects are too much. Thats why I say this is more of a wishfulfillmet. Like a chinesefanfic made. Im so critical because I expected better. So much shit on this site, I thought this would be one of a few that would shine. Shit. Turned out its catered for 12-20. The type to like harem and sht. To doscover fairy typing and sht. Like chinese fics. And lastly what pissed me off with this fanfic is how the Author replies. When he doesnt agree, he will fully argue with you. Dafuq? Learn to understand other peoples perspectives. Sometimes its not complaining, its just a topic good for a discussion. But what did you do? You delete those because it isnt good for you? Tsk loser mentality. You need to accept both praises and criticisms because this was made for public reading. And the public can comment about it. If you dont agree with it, its okay. But you argue like someone who isnt an author at all. Dafuq? Its the first time I met an author like you 😂 so butthurt. Learn to chill. Not everyone will like what you write or how you write it.

    Pokemon: A life worth living
    Video Games · Nuclide
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