Spawnout

that was the intention

I went into this fic not knowing what to expect, but I was pleasantly surprised! The author has a great grasp of the characters, keeping them true to their original personalities while still allowing for some interesting development. The dialogue felt natural, and the interactions were engaging—it really pulled me into the story. No chinese edge and brother or sister shit

There’s the grammar and spelling. Look, I get that not everyone is perfect, but basic proofreading exists. It’s hard to take a story seriously when it's littered with typos and weird sentence structures. If you’re going to put your work out there, at least run it through a spellcheck first. That being said, I do think the author has some potential. The ideas are there, but they need to slow down, plan things out better, and maybe get a beta reader to help clean things up. Right now, though? This was a struggle to get through utterly disgusting!! or just don't continue

okay bro

himself

i can swear i read this fanfic before but it was deleted..i think or something

okaaaay.......Thanks for the chapter

lol forgot about sukuna

its okay you are not a good reader but understand this 'Flashbacks exist because not every story is simple enough to tell in a straight line'.

bro what are you writing? I mean wow. just wow. no other words needed