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Thank you for pointing out the mistake in the chapters of my novel. I appreciate your feedback, and I'll make sure to correct it! ☺️
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Don't worry✋ Later in the story, it will be more paragraph-oriented. I'll also update the existing chapters to make them more presentable.☺️
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Thanks for your comment! Yes, vampires do exist in DxD, which is why I gave her vampiric powers for the future plot. Hope that makes sense! 😉
Thanks for your honest review! I appreciate the feedback. The church matter will indeed become a bigger focus as the story progresses, and giving Ren the chance to grow is part of that plan. I hope future chapters will resonate more with you!