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GoodSeed8dCommentedreminds me of Starbucks.. don't know why can't people use regular names
"Our sizes are cute, short, tall, cuddly, and extra cuddly," she said, seemingly oblivious to Steel's mounting rage.- GoodSeed15dCommentedCh 327 The Surge Of The Dormant Prowess
- GoodSeed17dReplied to Rana_Chim_Chim
you are absolutely right. people like different things in a story, that's why there are so many different genres and numerous stories. Of course you would write following your plots and thoughts, you are the author. and you have a wonderful plot here, very captivating. I hope I didn't offend you by expressing my thoughts, that was not my intention.
"Nothing?!" Rafe retorted. "I saw you embracing her on the bed with my own eyes! Do you think I'm st*pid enough not to know what had occurred?" - GoodSeed17dCommented
awesome, Elis! Kiev needs to know his place, you cannot have everything. let go of the Princess and get your soul mate. Really I can't take another concubine in the story, already I am irked by grand duke making Anna his concubine .. the Cassians are so righteous, yet they accept concubines .. hypocrites
The maid's voice held a mix of gratitude and determination as she responded, "I'm sorry, but I don't think I can continue serving you anymore. I acknowledge that you've done much for me, and I'm sincerely thankful for your kindness. However, I believe I have already repaid you by fulfilling your requests and doing everything you asked for. If you feel a debt is still to be repaid, please let me know how I can make it right. But I implore you, don't tell me to marry or serve you again." - GoodSeed19dReplied to Rana_Chim_Chim
yeah I know, it is good to be righteous. Sorry, but I also think, it is too much of a repetition every now and then, this knight and that noble etc. and here Rafe is dragging too much after a plausible explanation from the Mederian Prince and a witness. ofcourse it's your story, you write it as you simply fit. and thank you for taking time to respond :)
"Nothing?!" Rafe retorted. "I saw you embracing her on the bed with my own eyes! Do you think I'm st*pid enough not to know what had occurred?" - GoodSeed20dCommented
couldn't you come up with a better proposing Kiev? moron Rafe got on your nerve, and you proposed - how unromantic
"Elis, I am willing to marry you." - GoodSeed20dCommented
too much from Rafe. too much of self righteousness ruins the flow... stop dragging Rafe
"I don't believe you! You could've perfectly erased any evidence, and easily manipulated the circumstances to your advantage with your magic abilities!" Rafe stubbornly persisted, doubting Kiev's explanation. - GoodSeed20dCommented
shut up already Rafe
"Liar!" Rafe scoffed, unconvinced. - GoodSeed20dCommented
I don't like his outburst at all
"Nothing?!" Rafe retorted. "I saw you embracing her on the bed with my own eyes! Do you think I'm st*pid enough not to know what had occurred?" - GoodSeed20dCommented
callis is ready, you are not?
"Callis, listen..." Rafe spoke gently, his hand carefully rubbing her head. "I want to do it when we are both ready, not just out of responsibility. You are my wife, someone I respect and cherish. I don't see you solely as a means to bear children. When the time is right, and we both feel ready, we can seriously discuss expanding our family. Let's not rush into things for now." - GoodSeed22dCommentedCh 324 Sharing The Bed
- GoodSeed1mthCommented
back off Theo, let's not talk about the past.. you wouldn't want it
"You do not respect the mate bond if you believe it is a choice," he answered. "And you don't respect choice either if you took advantage of her ignorance when she was compelled… when YOU compelled her in order to make her forget me right before my eyes. You said you would protect her, and you failed to protect her from your own brother. And then you manipulated her in order to position yourself in her heart." - GoodSeed1mthCommented
that was such a nice and respectful attitude , thanks Gray
"She has a choice," Grayson replied, his voice quickly abandoning the understanding tone of deference and approaching a growl. "Everyone does. But I am saying I respect it." - GoodSeed1mthCommentedCh 204 Facing the Camazotz
- GoodSeed1mthCommentedCh 203 Ritual Chaos
- GoodSeed1mthCommented
poor Grayson
Then Cora cried herself back to sleep, and it was the saddest thing Grayson had ever heard. - GoodSeed1mthCommented
how did you react about Grayson kissing her, you hypocrite?
Theo curled his hands into fists and clenched his teeth together. Had she really done this because he slept with other women before? - GoodSeed1mthCommented
is she lusting over Theo? didn't see that coming
"I came to help my cousin," he replied, licking a buttery garlic sauce from his thumb and then reaching for a napkin instead when he saw the way her predatory eyes narrowed in on that action. - GoodSeed1mthCommentedCh 106 Change in plans (2)