Mr_0

The plot is good you introduced a lot within 7 chapters although it's not much try to update chapters like 3 chapters a week that will be much faster for you to get the plot somewhere that we the readers could understand but the characters are well written you can understand their ego and emotion i really enjoyed your work i hope you don't stop there cause i would like to see what's gonna happen with logan

I like ethan he is fun to read and kind of funny

Nice introduction of the place and the people

The fight scene need more touch i was not felling it

Nice world transportation dude neat

So far so good