Ivy_Moneke

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Ivy_Moneke3 months ago
Replied to Sunofthemorning
But he didn’t lie though Author. Especially the point about trees and swords. Your story definitely need’s proofreading
The Broken Halo
Fantasy · Anon22
Ivy_Moneke3 months ago
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No wonder his friends were able to betray and kill him if he was this naive
Which son wouldn't trust his mother naturally?
The Broken Halo
Fantasy · Anon22
Ivy_Moneke7 months ago
Replied to Ivy_Moneke
Lazy**
John had already assumed the disguise of his victim, who had been persuaded all night to reveal every single detail about himself, his relationships with others, and the Bloodfiend Sect. Coincidentally, the boy's name was also John, saving John a headache of having to learn to respond to a new name.
Ascension of the Immortal Asura
Fantasy · rRandom
Ivy_Moneke7 months ago
Commented
Another example of lay writing
John had already assumed the disguise of his victim, who had been persuaded all night to reveal every single detail about himself, his relationships with others, and the Bloodfiend Sect. Coincidentally, the boy's name was also John, saving John a headache of having to learn to respond to a new name.
Ascension of the Immortal Asura
Fantasy · rRandom
Ivy_Monekea year ago
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We’re all satisfied buddy
After brutally murdering his teammate, Leo had expected to feel ashamed, even disgusted by his actions—but instead, a strange sense of satisfaction settled over him.
Timeless Assassin
Fantasy · Raj_Shah_7152