1st chap was lil boring, but it's getting good and starting to develop well. not my kind of novel but i would love to read it, and know more about the story
quite good story development and reminds me of SAO, and i hope for more deep and complex story development [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
James then proceeded to stumble over to the bathroom where he started his morning routine. He took a shower, cleaned his teeth, and got dressed in a green t-shirt with a sexy elf girl on it, a pair of blue jeans with a black belt, and white sneakers.