Your creativity is amazing, Betty_Nigatu. But I have something to say about character development. The MC, Pragya, is not emotionally attached to the others. Work on that. Other than this, as an amateur writer having your first book on webnovel, this is just amazing! Keep up. Waiting for the real END. Waiting for your 2nd book!

This is a really fascinating story. Though the characters especially Pragya are a bit unrealistic and not emotionally attached to the other characters. But as an amateur writer having your first book on Webnovel, this is a hilarious start. Keep up. And update regularly!