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Hiwot_Astatke1mthCommentedI still don 't get why he still can't even say basic and simple words after a few months and why his strength is being so undermined when on multiple occassion the Arthur has described him as power full. Also until now he has nut used his fire or earth element he supposedly has. The book is still good but I hope you change some of this thing and my personal opinion i would love if you added more pov not to much but more then we currently have
Ch 51 Chapter 49: The Deal With the Emperor- Hiwot_Astatke5mthCommented
She Has never met a human she an alien trying to take over earth
Luna could not help but to release a light giggle by how straightforward Izroth was. She had met a lot of guys before and they either tried to hit on her or were utterly repulsive to talk to. They always whispered sweet things to you but never meant any of it. Honest guys like Izroth were quite rare, she could not help but become a bit more interested in him. - Hiwot_Astatke7mthPosted
The novel is amazin has a lot of thing going for it but the Arthur is so stupid as to leave such and amzing work and start 7 or 6 new novels that he didn' even finish all his work are incomplete the novel deserves a better arthour then him he failed as an arthour starting so many novels to not finishe them I have been waiting for over a year for a new chapter.