TheBeardedBard

For real? Finally, a story about an Aburame, it's even called "The Swarm", and the MC is terrible with his kikaichu and will go with Ninjutsu? Why even bother making him an Aburame then?

This was a great chapter, giving some real emotional depth to the MC and his team, showing that they aren't all just cold killers. Too many fics just have the MC uncaring or not even acknowledging the deaths of his teammates around him.

Giving him Ulquiorra's ultimate technique at only 10% seems quite early to me. I would have expected the bat form to be closer to 70-80% at minimum. Where does the template grow to now if he's already using the ultimate powers?

Mystical Palm is most definitely not one of the most basic medical ninjutsu at all. I'm pretty sure it's an A-Rank medical ninjutsu, and one that many people, even medical ninja, can't master.

Wasn't this entire story supposed to be based around the MC having the powers of the Atomic Samurai? Kinda destroying the entire basis of the plot by just turning him into Kizaru, this wasn't supposed to be a Kizaru Template story.

Is there a reason why the MC has never used any part of his foot other than the outside of his right? Every single time it's mentioned he kicks the ball, it's always with the outside of his right foot, even in a situation like a corner kick where that's just pointless.

didn't he need to get his stat up to 8 before leveling up? where did he suddenly get two entire levels from?

Didn't he just say a couple of chaps ago that he's seen ghosts? Why pretend now that he thinks everything is fake? That kind of detail should have been picked up on right away.

Hm, I must have glossed over that with some late-night reading - thanks for clearing it up