TiredGhost

Love it, I cant wait for your new fanfiction if you are ever going to write a new one.

honestly, among the fanfictions I read, this mc is among the ones who do not have a god complex. Compared to those ff's he does too little :d so I think mc is good enough. Also it is not that they have to accept everyone but everyone is welcome. for example if you are a serial killer and if supreme sorcerer does see that person as a serial killer he or she wouldnt accept that person but if he or she is a normal person and has enough reasons to learn mystic arts they most certainetly join

hey, did you drop this story? will you continue?

Take a break, wait for more inspiration. I hope you wont drop this fanfiction as I love reading this story. One of my favourites.

great story, I love it. Gimme moreeeeee.

Grammarly shouldnt do that as it just improves the grammar of pharagraphs. I know this because I used grammarly as well. So the only option left if you are not using AI is, your writing style is this.

This story is overall good but you need to improve your grammar, it is shit. Other than that everything is good, though I sense a little bit AI but I think you are using AI to improve your story pacing and you dont use AI to write the whole story. (The ending part of your chapters are AI like) Other then that everything is good. You are writing you own story, not someone else's so dont listen anyone if they are not paying you. Take their (mine too as I am not paying you) words as if they are from flies.

I wrote something incorrect, the correct form: Mc reincarnating and then just not forgetting his family is a good idea

one of the best fanfiction I have ever read, maybe second best. Story pacing is neither too fast or too slow, it is just right. Mc reincarnating and then just forgetting his family is a good idea you implemented in your story too, you avoided a cliche. You are trying to create a world background that you can alter without going too much off road so that is very good too. Even though you use AI to correct your grammar, believe me it doesnt show it. Simply 10 out of 10 story. I dont know if you are writing for pleasure or something else but I hope you dont drop this story. If you don't have time to write the story because you need to work to make money, may I suggest opening a patreon if you are not too busy. You could post 5 or 6 chapters ahead of webnovel and I dont know, charge 5 dollars. It could be a side hustle for you if you can manage it.

hey, I want to be a member of your patreon but I dont know the difference between 5 dollar and 7 dollar membership. Is 7 dollar one just a way to help you or is there anything extra