GrAce19

What is 530,000? She has 580,000 and by the 4th part of Douluo she has already 600,000

Why does he address Bi Ji as a man in the beginning, senor is the way he addresses a man. I didn't understand something. Chinese stuff again

The plot is coming to an end too quickly. A typical Chinese author. 700 chapters in the original and then decided for 300-350? I hate it when the plot moves fast

all fanfiction about Naruto is also canonical. Chinese or Western fanfiction, they're all canonical, just new characters added, but they almost all end the same way. Nothing surprising.

This fanfiction causes some contradictory feelings. Don't like how in Naruto or one piece there are a lot of fillers and unnecessary chapters. I don't like the system at all. There's even Chinese fanfiction that was better than this. I don't give a shit about the others

And how can she fight if she has hemophobia?

For 100 chapters, nothing particularly interesting happens. The years pass very quickly. Little intrigue, too kind, Danzo as always says that the Hokage will regret, the usual Chinese

and where is the third World War? After all, the third war began in 42-43 and lasted for 3 years. Minato became Hokage at 47 and died at 48.

Unfortunately, I hate reading this already. Fanfiction doesn't catch on at all, I don't understand why you like it. I'll go find another one.

there are too many unnecessary chapters (fillers)