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Smook015

Smook015

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  • Smook015
    Smook0153d ago
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    What was the intention behind showing mystical power in that interaction? Basically, he simply gave the information to Thanos! A colossal stupidity, in my opinion. I mean, he could have just not shown up and she would have left. Now he acts like a clown every time he shows the portal as if he were an idiot. It's one thing to play with Tony Stark's perception of the world. It's quite another to give information to a powerful enemy. If that's not the height of stupidity, I don't know what is. Sorry for the rant, but this chapter made me even angrier than I already was with this childish personality.

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    Smook0157d ago
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    One idiotic statement after another. Is that spaceship just sitting in space? How does he get out of the ship and not get lost in space? Theoretically, an interstellar spacecraft should be floating at millions of kilometers per hour in a vacuum, right? What nonsense! Even worse, this MC acts like an idiot with these phrases he thinks are funny. Anyway, I can't continue with this MC's idiocy. If it stops, maybe it will get interesting.

  • Smook015
    Smook0159d ago
    Posted

    I read up to chapter 15. Which is actually a lot. The story itself portrays the world's background well. But everything is absurdly easy for the MC; he simply started killing all the enemies that appeared, effortlessly, just killing them. Whether in the first nightmare or the winter solstice nightmare on the forgotten coast. What an absurdity, to have an MC who simply goes through the story solving everything, without difficulties or growth. He simply kills beasts, monsters, demons, devils, and plans to kill a tyrant as if it were just another trip to the supermarket. The story is good, but it lacks the depth and agony it should have, considering the original work. In short, I didn't like this aspect, which for me killed the story, but considering everything, this is also the only negative point, because the characters are well portrayed up to the chapter I read, chapter 15.

  • Smook015
    Smook01510d ago
    Posted

    The story has a good start, but before the 5th chapter we see that the MC is mentally ill! Am I exaggerating? We'll see. He, with no memory whatsoever, decided to let "Kakashi" die. It's normal not to feel anything for strangers, I agree with that. But in what society is it normal to abandon someone to death? But okay, it was the author's way of eliminating "Kakashi". But then the story continues, and we see the protagonist walking around like a pervert with his MGS activated and wearing a mask! What's that all about? Who wouldn't find that strange? Even I, putting myself in the MC's place and situation, found it strange. Tell me this MC doesn't have mental problems? He arrives in the city and the first thing he does? Walks around masked and with glowing eyes. He arrives at an inn and forces people to pay whatever he wants, reducing the price by more than half. Two random bandits appear and what does he do? Kills them! I remind you that he has no memories of Obito's life; he's simply someone who reincarnated in the body and killed. Well, I don't recommend this story for morally sound people. But if you don't mind the inexplicable moral degradation that happens overnight, this story will serve as good entertainment.

  • Smook015
    Smook01511d ago
    Posted

    I don't recommend the story. The protagonist is awful. Typical "To-Love-Ru" protagonist; every woman around him is somehow attracted to the MC or has to have some kind of interaction where the woman admires the MC. Which, for me, who hates harems, is bad, even without knowing if this story leads to a harem in the future, not to mention his personality, which is horrible, hesitating his whole life, running away his whole life. I really don't believe that someone would simply not use their skills if they could. Does that mean if I'm a genius in MMA, I have to act like an average fighter just because all the competitors are? What absurd thoughts this MC has! He spends half the story reflecting on not becoming this or that. As long as he's not a psychopath, isn't that great? Why spend the whole story reflecting like a philosopher? Go live your life! I read up to chapter 10, where he was like a madman punching things in a factory and found MJ being mugged and acted like a hero. For me, this was the end of this poorly told story, because the author seems to be an avid fan of indecision. First, there's another woman clinging to the MC like glue for saving her. Second, didn't he want to hide his powers? Why not use his super speed when MJ had her eyes closed and take her home? Nobody would know. That's why I don't recommend it. This is the story of an indecisive person who created an indecisive and boring character.

  • Smook015
    Smook01511d ago
    Posted

    The story is great. But it simply strayed from the premise. What do I mean by that? Well, the title already says what to expect. "MARVEL: INCURSIO" – that's what I expected. Someone with the Incursio armor training to master the weapon. And it was really good, him training swordsmanship, after much effort unlocking the armor... planning spear training... but what ruined the story from 5 ⭐️ to less than half was the way the story shifted from warrior to master of the mystic arts. Basically, after he goes to Kamar-Taj, the Incursio became more of a defensive support than anything else. He trains and improves the armor's adaptability, but all the fights begin and end with magic. Reaching the later chapters, it simply introduced a "domain expansion" that, in theory, farms aura for the MC. But it negates any usefulness of the Teigu itself, since he "controls" the environment to trap or kill weak enemies, and against stronger ones he simply uses magic, which again makes one wonder, why not magic from the beginning without the Teigu premise? Anyway. Many people might not care much about this, as it was the MC's growth in power. But for me, who expected to see something different from the usual apprenticeship of the supreme sorcerer and to see someone actually fighting and sweating, it was disappointing.

  • Smook015
    Smook01512d ago
    Posted

    No harem and a great story. 5 ⭐️ is too little. Although the fights are predictable since in 140 chapters the MC didn't have a single fight where he was truly challenged. The story as a whole would be 4 ⭐️ because of that. But any story without a harem deserves 5 ⭐️.

  • Smook015
    Smook01515d ago
    Replied to orangegummy

    His abilities are mostly physical. For example, he can buy haki, fighting styles, supreme blades, physical abilities, etc. He doesn't have cultivation-style abilities like superhuman powers, as far as I've read.

  • Smook015
    Smook01515d ago
    Posted

    I paused reading for a bit to evaluate. Very good, I got to chapter 22, and I say: 10 out of 10! The protagonist has a great personality, gives off the right vibe when talking and making friends. Even when he was a little arrogant, he quickly understood that he needed to reassess himself. And the best part: the system doesn't give powers or items out of nowhere. Even when he improves his skills, he has to train. This makes the experience great for us readers, without making the protagonist become a god right away. There are no complaints about the story, it's very good. What makes it even better is the "no harem" tag; this undoubtedly elevates the story to another level, because we are eager to find out if there will be a romantic partner. And if there is, who? How will they meet? Will she be strong? Will she share his enthusiasm for adventure? In short, when it's a harem, this doesn't happen, because in each village, each adventure where the protagonist sees a beautiful woman, mysteriously "the authors" make the plot revolve around the women falling in love and agreeing to share. Which, for me, makes the story half of what it could be. Any story, which is why I avoid the harem tag.