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Chiefnaoto3452dCommentedGood I’ve seen too many fanfics like that👍
(A/N: Just to be clear, this won't be a kingdom-building story. There may be moments like this where that's mentioned, but it will never be the focus.)- Chiefnaoto34512dCommented
Bruh. Our whole class got white belts in 5th grade just by participating in gym class. That’s not something to even mention
During middle school, I learned some taekwondo, even reaching the white belt, so my body wasn't in the worst shape. However, since entering this school, I had been completely neglecting exercise, so my endurance was fairly low. - Chiefnaoto34517dReplied to OzenndetailThrough the Looking Glass (Magi x Naruto) (Sinbad x Sakura) crossoverAnime & Comics · Katsura_369
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I hate when authors makes an op mc suddenly weak and stupid for plot reasons. It shows lazy writing or just bad writing.
And checked the situation after getting a good look, and I found the situation not in my favour because things already reached to her brain and if I tried to do anything then it might harm her or even worse she might die - Chiefnaoto34521dCommented
Nah that bs
"Master…" Heard Grayfia calling but suddenly, that thing out of my hand, slipped away which should have been impossible and then launched itself towards Grayfia which is fast enough for it to reach her body before I could even catch it - Chiefnaoto3451mthCommented
Im starting to wonder if this is the type of story where mc acts differently for plots sake.
The fury was back in full swing. I glared at the droid which had helped Grievous to escape and flung my right hand at it. It rose in the air with its limbs flailing uselessly around. I made a gripping motion with my fist and its arms and legs became taut. One by one its limbs were twisted away from the struggling machine. When only its torso remained the robot gave off a piteous whine before being squashed into a football sized sphere. - Chiefnaoto3451mthReplied to warheight
man all I saw was mc struggling to kill grevious. If he was playing with him he would be laughing and evading everything but he almost got killed twice and was blinded by anger half the time
That fucking tin can escaped, damn it all to hell! - Chiefnaoto3451mthCommented
Exactly what I was talking about. One minute he’s an experienced sith and knows every battle tactic and the next he acts like a 19 year old anakin who’s impulsive, narrow minded and can’t pay attention to anything but the thing in front of him. It’s very frustrating. Should have just made the god give mc force powers if he was gonna be like this not have him as an experienced sith LORD and have him pretty much say this era is a simple for someone like me from the old republic and then struggles his first battle and making decisions someone like a sith apprentice blinded by anger and arrogance would
"Damn it I should start paying attention! That is the hangar of a Separatist ship! Of course there will be vultures inside!" I grumbled to myself. I was acting impulsively without thinking through my actions. It was good think that Skywalker was not around to see me! The kriffing Jedi would have had a field day at my expense after the chat we had earlier. - Chiefnaoto3451mthCommented
This whole story from start to finish has been a massive disappointment… Mc is complete trash as a person and character. He’s arrogant, retarted, he acts like he knows everything but when it comes to crucial moments he shows his real self as just a stupid arrogant narcissistic person. He’s had 1000 years and doesn’t learn martial arts at all in a word full of ninjas. He’s shown to be incompetent from the start. I was excited for an insert mc with anos powers but everything shown so far has completely ruined that concept
Ch 9 Overcoming Destruction - Chiefnaoto3451mthCommented
Come on😂 I’m almost 100% sure you can’t get sith eyes from just that. Anakin slaughtered the tusken raiders with pure hatred and the jedi after becoming Vader and he didn’t have yellow sith eyes till mustafar
Hearing Aayla's scared voice, Peter froze for a moment and looked up, his eyes shining a dull yellow as he saw the little girl before him cowering in fear. "Oh, sh*t…" he muttered as he took in some slow breaths and began to meditate, wrestling his emotions until they were under control. - Chiefnaoto3451mthCommented
Mc sucks…
"...Yes, ma'am" I hang my head in shame and sat down right across her. - Chiefnaoto3451mthPosted
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Any casual man should be able get out a women’s grasp. Not to mention someone who trained like a superstar athlete everyday…. Bad writing
Eren eventually stopped struggling before letting out a tired sigh. "What did I do to deserve this?" He asked himself without a hint of seriousness. - Chiefnaoto3451mthCommented
That makes no sense
Although the Limited Tsukuyomi didn't work quite as they thought, but Satoru's five senses were swapped with Terumi Mei's from Kirigakure by accident. - Chiefnaoto3451mthCommentedCh 1 Gojo
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First and last fanfic I will read from this author
"It is." Ophis could feel her life was dwindling, yet she said those words sincerely. "You're warm, so warm that it makes me find the meaning of life. You give me meaning. I might disappear, but I will be with you. Thank you, Riser." - Chiefnaoto3451mthCommentedCh 29 Enrollment & Meeting