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Ronathan02

Ronathan02

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  • Ronathan02
    Ronathan028mth
    Replied to Zhorvak

    But there’s only 5 of them… for now.

    "Well, I don't see much reason to add a sixth member to our group. We have a good thing going as it is, and I'd rather not divide the money with another person."
    The Infamous Spider-Man
    Anime & Comics · Ronathan02
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  • Ronathan02
    Ronathan028mth
    Replied to Zhorvak

    Felicia’s romance with Scott is very different than Peter’s, but yes them both being thieves helps a lot.

    Felicia pulled her lips off of his, met his gaze and smiled. "Because I care about you, silly. That's why." She whispered.
    The Infamous Spider-Man
    Anime & Comics · Ronathan02
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  • Ronathan02
    Ronathan029mth
    Replied to Demons_and_I

    I’ll take a look! Right now I’m in the process of moving though so I’ll need a day or so.

    Ch 2 Friendly Neighborhood Criminal
    The Infamous Spider-Man
    Anime & Comics · Ronathan02
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  • Ronathan02
    Ronathan029mth
    Replied to Demons_and_I

    Thank you! I wrote this novel as if it was an actually licensed Marvel story, and I’m glad people are liking it!

    Ch 2 Friendly Neighborhood Criminal
    The Infamous Spider-Man
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  • Ronathan02
    Ronathan029mth
    Replied to Paprea74

    Personally it’s up to you and your story, not every novel is the same. Personally my novel averages about 2,000 words per chapter, but I do what feels right to me.

    Take Me Ho(e)me
    Fantasy · Paprea74
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  • Ronathan02
    Ronathan029mth
    Replied to Paprea74

    Of course. I definitely noticed some issues, but they didn’t detract too much from the story. Honestly I’d suggest just reread the book and find any spelling errors or punctuation mistakes. You might find some sentences that you don’t like how they read anymore. Just because you posted it doesn’t you can’t tweak errors, I do that in my book all the time!

    Take Me Ho(e)me
    Fantasy · Paprea74
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  • Ronathan02
    Ronathan029mth
    Posted

    Overall it’s hard to say too much about the quality of this book since it’s so early on, but I’m interested! The writing is lax, which will be appealing for some readers and less so for others. The characters and where they’re going has left me intrigued, and I think it’s worth giving this a read on that alone!

    Take Me Ho(e)me
    Fantasy · Paprea74
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  • Ronathan02
    Ronathan029mth
    Posted

    The main characters in this story are written to be packed with emotion, the world they inhabit and the conflicts they face are well worth giving this book a read!

    Heatherland.
    Eastern · GMS Jakers
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  • Ronathan02
    Ronathan029mth
    Posted

    Of the books I’m reading on Webnovel this is easily one of my favorites, the suspenseful atmosphere and mysteries to unravel gripped me. I absolutely love where this novel is going and eagerly await more. High recommend, a breath of fresh air.

    Echoes of the Night
    Horror · SarahYeager
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  • Ronathan02
    Ronathan029mth
    Posted

    This is a gripping romance story with likable characters and great pacing. I love that it’s period piece, adds a lot of flavor to the story. Highly recommend for fans of romance

    Earning the Love of a Princess
    History · Gabrielle_Johnson_6482
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  • Ronathan02
    Ronathan029mth
    Replied to Swiftescape

    The villain tag is completely valid if you read the story

    The Infamous Spider-Man
    Anime & Comics · Ronathan02
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  • Ronathan02
    Ronathan029mth
    Replied to Zhorvak

    Since my take on The Shocker character was very different from the original (mutant, different role in story, etc) I decided to have a different character take the mantle. It’s possible Herman could show up later though.

    The first to speak up was the youngest of the trio, a teenage looking Hispanic kid with curly brown hair pulled back in a ponytail with the sides shaved. He was short and skinny. "I'm Jamie, but you can call me The Shocker."
    The Infamous Spider-Man
    Anime & Comics · Ronathan02
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  • Ronathan02
    Ronathan029mth
    Replied to Zhorvak

    I appreciate the review! I am curious how far into the book you got though, since I’ve tried to make it clear that despite being a criminal Scott isn’t evil. Chapter 6 explores what you mentioned about him trying to be good but turning to crime.

    The Infamous Spider-Man
    Anime & Comics · Ronathan02
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