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Daoistf9vx1S3dReplied to Dr_deezCause boys to daydream makes this make a lot more sense
Even though each girl's body was developing, their proportions spoke that each of them will be a top-class beauty in a few years capable of causing countless men to be asleep.- Daoistf9vx1S3dCommented
There’s a bunch of comments on this paragraph which made me notice the glace instead of glance, yet none of the comments were about it, so Glace> Glance
Jasmine's long lavender hair which reached up to the waist, Eve with her delicate brownish French braid and Aushima's feathered hair with a touch of cyan, each had their unique charm and their enchanting eyes were enough to capture the heart of all onlookers with a single glace. - Daoistf9vx1S4dCommented
I’m not sure if the wayy was on purpose or not but thought I’d just mark it
Only once the fight was over, did Leo realize that he had been fighting wayy more aggressively than usual. - Daoistf9vx1S8dCommented
Companions’ Banner
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Ya this is just like the 5th time I’ve been led by either read 10 min or by recommendation to a book placeholder like this. Webnovel needs to mark these in their algorithm
detailI've already become a Titled Douluo and now the System shows up?Book&Literature · Proud fried cake - Daoistf9vx1S1mthCommented
Uriel’s demise >chagrin?
At some point, the entity nosferatu vampire that lurked inside the Alamo roared stopping the smaller ones on the spot. Much to Uriel's demise, they started gathering in a single massive group. Just when Uriel thought everything was lost, the sounds of gunshots came from behind and the first row of vampires dropped to the ground like toys that ran out of battery. - Daoistf9vx1S2mthCommented
His> her
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Muzzle
Reality differed quite a lot from that, as the outcome the big bad dog expected never came to happen. What happened instead was Medusa spinning in the air and crossing its nuzzle with a powerful kick that killed it instantly. - Daoistf9vx1S2mthCommented
Crepy
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Honestly I was looking for a NPC story when I started reading, and it’s that, closer to This Game is Too Realistic than say Legendary Mechanic. The MC Murphy is a Transmigratior who ended up in a SteamPunk tech fantasy world, he gets a system that starts bringing players in, and is their gamemaster while he bluffs being the game-maker on the forums; and the NPC that gives them all there starts in universe. I’m waiting to see if the Worldbuilding fleshes out the world as cool as I am expecting. But I do find the forum and player funny, but what I want to see is the World and how it’s factions react to the players.
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I think close there throats was meant to be something about sneaking, moving and/ or striking silently.
Archers have ranged attacks and flexible skills, this job is filled with power and wisdom. they don't need a strong body, because they needed to travel thousands of miles to track monsters' tracks,they also needed to have intelligent minds to know how to close their throats and make the monsters unable to fight back. - Daoistf9vx1S3mthCommented
Gender pronoun
The number was hanging above her head. - Daoistf9vx1S3mthCommented
Partially 1st person maybe should be him instead of me?
The wolf king's neck suddenly shook, opened his mouth, and roared, and the buffalo-like body suddenly jumped up, and then violently carried me with his hands around his neck. - Daoistf9vx1S3mthCommented
I think this should be above the wolf’s head.
Several figures appeared in the wolf's head. This showed that Ling Ran's attack was quite effective at injuring them. However, this wolf was much stronger than yesterday's rat. - Daoistf9vx1S3mthCommented
Come on* Makes me think come one come all, when first seeing it.
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Respected master or something being find and replaced with a machine translator too quickly, like right it’s got to be?!
It only took two days for him to decide that it was better to stay out of the affairs between Zhu Qianying and his grandfather. - Daoistf9vx1S5mthCommented
She’s a Canary*
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