I'm Kirino (or Kishino) a fifteen year old writer. I mostly write on my free time or whenever inspiration strikes. I'm not much good in writing but I mostly do it because it's fun.
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The story is visibly confused on how to format itself but it's to be expected from an un-experienced writer (Note: this is not a personal attack against the author.). I hope that they continue updating this story and keep a more stable update schedule.
The earlier chapters of the story are formatted weirdly and it's very confusing but moving forward, it's a stable story overall. Although, the world around the story needs some polishing. The characters on the other hand are nothing of noteworthy even the FL had no eye-catching traits. It's the basic surrogate MCs that readers are suppose to insert themselves into but that shouldn't be a bad thing if executed perfectly. Anyhow, the writing is stable even good at best. The pacing is not too fast and not too slow.
Keep up the good work being a jerk or making the story? Nah, I'm just kidding. Thanks for the review.