Magic yay :D
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It was horrible, I can tell you've plagiarised the entire thing from ChatGPT because it screams unnatural. If you want to use it, just keep it to a minimum. Also there's barely any change in the story so...yeah, no bueno.
Cid Kagenou.
This is good. I hope you continue to write.
Don't you mean 'Kill the Sun?'
Italy??? Mussolini eh
nice reference
The beginning could have been better. And the grammar isn't all that great either. It's alright i suppose, not too bad but certainly not 'great'.
yes.
obviously protag lol
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