Jack_Viquez
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Jack_Viquez9dCommentedCh 50 Chapter 17: Ave Imperator pt 3- Jack_Viquez1mthCommentedCh 49 Chapter 16: Ave Imperator pt 2
- Jack_Viquez1mthCommentedCh 48 Chapter 15: Ave Imperator pt 1
- Jack_Viquez1mthCommentedCh 47 Chapter 14: the Grand Conspiracy pt 4
- Jack_Viquez3mthCommentedCh 46 Chapter 13: The Grand Conspiracy pt 3
- Jack_Viquez3mthCommentedCh 5 Chapter 5: Deus ex Machina
- Jack_Viquez3mthCommentedCh 4 Chapter 04: Knowledge
- Jack_Viquez3mthCommentedCh 3 Chapter 3: Enlightement
- Jack_Viquez3mthCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2: Awakening
- Jack_Viquez3mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: Discovery
- Jack_Viquez3mthCommentedCh 45 Chapter 12: The Grand Conspiracy pt 2
- Jack_Viquez4mthCommentedCh 44 Chapter 11: The Grand Consipracy pt 1
- Jack_Viquez4mthCommentedCh 43 Chapter 10: The Immortal's Journey
- Jack_Viquez4mthCommentedCh 42 Chapter 9: Italica Reformation
- Jack_Viquez6mthCommented
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"Ding! Activation failed!" - Jack_Viquez6mthCommentedCh 1 1. Life Is A Race
- Jack_Viquez7mthCommentedCh 40 Chapter 7: The Story of Retribution pt 3
- Jack_Viquez7mthCommentedCh 39 Chapter 6: The Story of A Retribution pt 2
- Jack_Viquez7mthPosted
Buena historia y la recomiendo, lastima que está abandonada. Una crítica que dejo es que los personajes se comunican como si fuera un guion de teatro, lo que le quita en mi opinión una buena coherencia convincente, pero solo es algo que no me termino de gustar, y solo toca esperar que si el autor lo actualiza quite eso.
- Jack_Viquez7mthCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2: The Arrival