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InfernusReal

InfernusReal

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A totally calm and reasonable person.

2023-08-09 JoinedGlobal
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16.2h

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  • InfernusReal
    InfernusReal16d
    Replied to Rerian

    Sorry. Haha.

    "Yearning for a mother's love? Hahahah! What a joke!" A middle-aged man said in disgust while moving towards the child in front of him. Slapping him in the face repeatedly.
    altalt
    Infernal Progression System
    Fantasy · InfernusReal
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  • InfernusReal
    InfernusReal16d
    Replied to Rerian

    He is 10. As for narration, it's mostly 3rd person but sometimes omniscient.

    As the door opened, Rafael's bloodied face came into view. His face looked like that of a 10-year-old child, blood was coming through his mouth and nose and his eyes were red due to the tears he cried in silence.
    altalt
    Infernal Progression System
    Fantasy · InfernusReal
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  • InfernusReal
    InfernusReal16d
    Posted

    The novel's great overall. The character development and the explanation are enjoyable and easy to understand. Although there's room for improvement, it's still great for a novel that's just starting. Keep up the excellent work!

    altalt
    The Duke's Youngest Son is a Regressor
    Fantasy · Rerian
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  • InfernusReal
    InfernusReal29d
    Posted

    Hello, Author here. Obviously, I'm gonna rate this novel 5 stars cause it's my book. Still, I am here to say that those who want to have a satisfying read and love plot twists, engaging action, scheming, wars and diverse roles, while also being balanced with romance and all other genres (Common ones). Then this is the best you could get. I will make sure that everything is balanced. Character development, plot twists, climax etc. Still, If I make a mistake in the middle, I am completely open to criticism, whether it's my writing style, plot etc. Please do let me know if there's something that you don't find engaging and I will try my best to fix it. Cya!

    altalt
    Infernal Progression System
    Fantasy · InfernusReal
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  • InfernusReal
    InfernusReal4mth
    Replied to Raziel_456

    Anytime mate.

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  • InfernusReal
    InfernusReal4mth
    Replied to Raziel_456

    I'd recommend you to stay cause things are about to become really difficult. But that won't happen till at least chapter 25 or 30. Also I know it's kind of awkward due to his age but I have fixed that in chapter 17.

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  • InfernusReal
    InfernusReal4mth
    Replied to Raziel_456

    No, there is a difference in the system. The shadows Ash has a fiery nature due to Scarlet being a part of his soul. As a result, the shadows which are most likely known for their adaptability get a power-up when they go on the offensive side. I've also found a way to get a good increase in the defensive and I've implied that in the latest chapters I have released.

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  • InfernusReal
    InfernusReal8mth
    Commented

    I love this

    Ch 8 Nothing at All
    altalt
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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