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Alright, this is officially peak fiction
Thank you for pointing it out—and I mean it, I just read the chapter 1-3 and found a few issues; a bit of inconsistencies, rushing of dialogues and Olivia just accepting it, Tone switching alot, and you’re right, I am not gonna pretend I am a pro writer, I made mistakes, and I will fix them, tomorrow morning the chapters will be updated with the edited ones! Thankfully these are minor issues and I already found solutions, but I can understand ur anger as it probably killed your immersion. I am sorry!
You, cause u can’t even guess the plot of a fukin fanfic
Selene:
Enimies? More like victims