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That’s a good premise could be cool but no week underrated main character and then everything is just nonsense so you got the you know normal Chinese fuel party and the way they did things and then you also got some strange half apocalyptic world and weird concepts coming here and there so it’s just a mess

It always brings a chuckle to my American heart when I see these stories with this ignorant savage customs that these Chinese fools had a look your family can kill you and treat you like shit as long as they’re the older generation, but you’re foolish people got backwards, man

See the beginnings of a failure of an author right here you can’t do it right buddy. What are you doing? This is trash. Do not make a piece of crap man character learn retard on WebNovel. No one likes it. No one likes it.

Look if you went about writing a system space/apocalyptic book with the worst of every single aspect you would get this book

Again, you are ignorant your characters are ignorant the naivety you are displaying with these character characters. Everyone else is hard-core squared away good apocalypse characters, but your leads are trash.

Man, this is pathetic

I have to say this right here this book right here these main characters right here are probably in the running for number one worst crap on WebNovel these guys right here for your enjoyment and pleasure

White guys this is free right now and I’m I’m almost vomiting with how trash this is

Look this is free right now and I almost can’t stomach it

Garbage, trash, pathetic, worthless, your main character characters